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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Icicles It gave you pleasure, melting my resistance shining in the sparkle you found in my eyes twinkling treasure Partially hidden from view wrapped in glossy paper you tore away layers, ribbons untied Held this gift in your gaze, touched outer layers, slipped in skillfully, heat replaced cold, closed my eyes, milky ways I have often wished upon you like some far off star in the icy wintery sky, and thought, Darlin’, if you only knew © 1999 Corinne Bailey |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Corinne Man! This was a great poem, with a KILLER last line. Any man who reads that last line and doesn't "gulp" is made of stone. I'm going home right now to see my Lorelei and make her see those Milky Ways. Thanks for the inspriation. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hey, everybody - read this poem, darnit! Its back to the top for one more pass through the gauntlet |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This poem was full of wanting, I loved the images you created!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
LngJhnAg - thank you so very much! If this inspired even the teeniest bit, then my day has been made! Much thanks also for passing it through once again! divina - that's me, full of wanting! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Corinne!  Denise |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Corinne, such a picture it paints |
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