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A Brilliant Star!!
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A Brilliant Star!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Your dreamy eyes Sparkle like brilliant diamonds Projecting colours of the Rainbow way up high into the skies In my eye's You are an Angel Floating a few feet higher Than anyone around you Your Skin gleems in the sunlight Longing and Needing to touch it I look upon you in disbelief An Aura surrounds you Of Radiant Orange and Gold Your beauty beckons me. This Moment My heart will always hold You smile at me Gracefully and I see a Star A Brilliant Star! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Beautiful poem  I like it |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
This is beatiful DA - well done. Like the title of the poem, it is a brilliant star! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is really beautiful DA. It flows nicely and projects a great picture |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Whiskey, thank youglad you like it ---------------- Moonshine, Thank you honey for your lovely comment. ---------------- Thank you Ruth, your comments always mean so much to me What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is lovely - illuminating! Good writing there fellow Downunder girl. K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
'Tis a wondrously well written verse soul-sib. Peace be with you my frirnd. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A poem that shines light upon darkness is a wonderful one indeed... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Dark Angel! Simply beautiful! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This just sparkles, Dark Angel Just like you do I love the love behind your poetry Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Severn,Soul-Brother,Nan Denise and Elizabeth, Thank you all so very much for your kind and lovely comments. *hugs* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Softly elegant! Beautiful! I like this a lot...  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon,Thank you so very much glad you liked it What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow DA! This was beautiful! Excellent job!  < !signature--><*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 01-07-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel, Thanks so much for your lovely comment, I'm glad you liked it. I love the little Angel, so cute, thanks Hon! *hugs* < !signature-->What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 01-07-2000).] |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Wow... beautiful Dark Angel. I like this so very much. Simply beautiful. B Gravitt |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Betty, Thank you so very much, glad you like it! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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