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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Please come back I scream out your name but your not there you've been gone for some time now but i just now see how much i need and want you in my life I want to have the chance to apologize I want to tell you how much I love you I want to tell you what a great friend you were to me I want you to know how much you meant to me and how you made me become a better person inside I just want the chance to say goodbye I just want one more day I miss you so much! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem , Welcome to passions  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Welcome to passions, you've got some great thoughts here, just a suggestion, this would read more smoothly if you rearranged em a bit. Point taken none the less! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Welcome to passions!! Missing someone is the worst feeling in the world but talking about it is the best thing. At least that is what I have learned. You found a home here!!!1 |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you everyone! this is one of my first poems so i was a little nervous about it  ) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
It is quite a scary thing posting one of your first poems...I still remember mine! This is great - and welcome to our family...  K'...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Great poem Crazy Chick! You express yourse;f very well : ) |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
You don't seem all that crazy to me! but if YOU do you are in the right place and WECOME ! ! Paul |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When I lost my mother I learned, the hard way, that we can never count on having a tomorrow... and unsaid words can haunt us as much as words hurled in anger and later regretted. Well done... and welcome! |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you everyone! |
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