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Sharleen
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since 2000-01-05
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0 posted 2000-01-05 10:30 PM


Okay here is one I started and I'm stuck. Help me out by adding on to where I left off. It's just for fun and there's know harm done.

  Money comes and money goes it just don't last. You work all week long then it's just gone,don't know where it went, maybe to pay rent?

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-05 10:48 PM


I work so hard from break of dawn
But where has all the money gone
At setting sun when day is o'er
Just what is all my labor for?
To pay the bills, of course the rent
But on myself not one cent spent
I guess I should have married rich
I'd have it all without a hitch
But as they say true love is blind
So now I struggle in this bind
Of rising early in the morn
To join the ranks of the forlorn
Who work and toil everyday
For such a meager measley pay!  

This was fun!



 Denise


Sharleen
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since 2000-01-05
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2 posted 2000-01-06 12:31 PM


Measley pay you say, Yea the heart is such a fool,for I should have gone to school.
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