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Sharleen
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since 2000-01-05
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0 posted 2000-01-05 09:55 PM



I see you standing there with your head in your hands I know you're hurting you know that hurts me too. Something the matter and I just don't know what to do.

Love's on the line and I wish you could see What that is and what it does to me. She is all I hear and I know you care.

I see the way you feel and I know your love's for real, Why can't you see the flowers were for me.
I been here while she's been there.Look inside and feel me cry, For my love is alive.


 

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-05 10:07 PM


Sad   I can sense the longing in this. Very well done Sharleen!

 Denise


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