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Of ups and downs
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Of ups and downs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of ups and downs My problem, a valley of repose, Were flowers of serenity doze. Were beds the mind on happiness, That lies among the emptiness. It is a place I do enjoy, If it were not for my wives annoy. For she wakes me up in constant sweep, When I am in this pleasant deep. I flounder in the ups and downs The busy of her dos and rounds. I try my best, the best I can, For I'm no saint, only a man. I really would she ring a bell, Then shake me wake, it feels like hell I do get up a little gruff And speak to her a little rough. But life is full of ups and downs, Kings and Queens and crowns and clowns. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Now Sy- don't be so cranky hun! I just made it clear when me and my ex were together, that if he tried to wake me up- I'd start biting and clawing!  see? no need for rough words huh? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, So now we see the other side Would this be Jeckell or is it Hyde? Now let me give you some advice Treat her sweet, and treat her nice You have some little chores to do She'll cook a dinner just for you Love ya, Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sy! I am shocked! I always thought you were a saint!  Cute poem! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, Gruff? Never! Said 'nuff... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Devina, Well I'm only a mild grump, Thanks for the comment. Elizabeth, Well I do like to cat nap and for some reason it seems to bother her, I don't wake her when she naps. Well maybe I should? Love Sy Denise, Hey even saints nap once in a while. *L* Sunshine, Not really. *L* |
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Deborah Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 41 |
Cute poem. Ups and downs are part of every relationship. Deborah |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Deborah, Exactly, that is what I meant to say. Thank you for the comment. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
ROFL at you! hehe Here Sey, take 3 of these and call me in the morning...(handing him a handful of Midol !)  Tis ok to be grouchy, tell her it's just your time of the month! hehe She'll understand completely - promise!** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000! |
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