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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So beautiful... I'm sitting here listening to SAVAGEGARDEN as they sing their song... "I KNEW I LOVED YOU BEFORE I MET YOU"... and it makes me sad that we've been so far apart for way to long. The song makes me think about your gentle spirit and your warm soft heart that goes with it, which is making me want to see your smiling face and experience your rich embrace. Oh, how I'd Love to feel your smooth velvity skin, and now I'm desiring to caress your body once again. I find myself agreeing with Darren Hayes and Daniel Jones as they express so well in this special song they are singing tonight, I find myself listening closely as it seems they say it exactly right... "I THINK I DREAMED YOU INTO MY LIFE"... But wait a minute, this is all just a dream thats been enticing me, its all a fantasy, a hope that dwells inside still waiting to be set free. You know that I want to live in this very moment yet that moment never seems to be here. And when or where or how it will arrive is far from approaching perfectly clear. Why is it so hard for me to accept you as a friend? I'm always thinking I want more of you and hoping and praying that this marvelous journey will never end. So I must confess I'm still desiring that first caress, that first embrace and kiss and I'm also waiting to feel your tenderness. Most of all I eagerly desire to look into your lovely eyes and see the essence of your caring as your eyes reveal your inner beauty to me. jameslee@Jan2000@forMich [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-06-2000).] |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
I myself have often listened to that song, and felt so much from it about my own relationship.Nicely written. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
That song does the same to me, wonderful poem  |
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Deborah Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 41 |
Nice poem, songs can sometimes say what we want to so perfectly. I love Savage Garden, their music is enspiring, and you captured that well by reaching into it with your heart and finding what you felt towards someone. Deborah |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, James! Songs can sometimes do that to us! Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Enjoyed the poem very much... and that song seems to echo the feelings of many. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I appreciate your comments and I share your appreciation of poetry and music I was sortof thinking about buying a Savagegarden CD and Mich recommended the one "Affirmation with the song "I Knew I Loved You" so I went to the Borders music store and listened to it for a few and I loved that song...so I bought the CD. Now every time I listen to it I think about Mich so this was originally an email that I sent to Mich. James |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I too have most of their tracks, and all sung with such emotion...goes with the poem.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
RainbowGirl, Thanks for sharing with me. I edited just a little bit after I reread the poem I decided to rearrange. James |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
James, I too love that song, and yes it does bring out inner feelings in all of us. Love the poem. They go together so well. B Gravitt |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Betty for reading and your nice comments. My friend Mich is the one who encouraged me to listen to SAVAGEGARDEN and also Celine Dion who has some wonderful and romantic songs. She recently brought one of her songs to my attention titled "That's The Way It Is". In part she sings "When life is empty..with no tomorrow..and loneliness starts to call..baby don't worry..forget your sorrow..cause love's gonna conquer all." These are words of inspirations to me. I believe that Love is just around the corner for each one of us and someday we will find it. James |
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Mary Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 38Delaware, Ohio, USA |
Hi James! I love this poem. Guess I am missing something by not listening to SavageGarden huh? I must agree with your comment, love is out there waiting for you. I hope you find it soon! Good Luck, and thanks for commenting on my poem as well! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Mary, Thank you for reading and for the nice comment about my poem. Yes I have to agree that you are missing some romantic moments if you don't listen to SAVAGEGARDEN. I remember your poem confused and I hope life is treating you better now...and I hope mutual attractions will be in your future. I see you like the same icon that I like. Take care, James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
James, you should listen to more songs |
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