The promise of the pain.....

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Open Poetry #5

The promise of the pain.....

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-13 10:41 PM

it feels like the first time..
trying to convince them all
im just fine
so they can roll their eyes
dismiss me ..like i am to blame
why cant anyone leave me sane....
its going to be the last ride..
ill ever take
this constant ..repeating heartbreak
all the twitching muscles
all the pulsing veins
will never put the promise
back into the pain...

CrazyChick
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since 2000-01-05

Posts 132

1 posted 2000-01-14 12:15 PM

Great work!!!

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2000-01-14 03:09 AM

Very true, loved your last two lines, they say it all!

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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3 posted 2005-04-16 05:00 PM

thanks for this

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