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Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
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0 posted 2000-01-04 11:15 PM




Unforgiven & unforgotten pasts haunt like the moon's shadow
Outlooks are hindered by those nights of far far ago
Can't make right; what has already gone wrong
Bury them before the end; to just get along

Day in and day out blood circulates thru... my torn heart
A little at a time leaks... until it's completly apart

Death will come: and way to soon
In I came alone but yet illumed
The bright lights of birth I hope are there in death
Alone I came, but hopefully not until my last breath


 



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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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1 posted 2000-01-05 12:22 PM


Beautifully stated  
Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-05 11:10 AM


Very nice!  

 Denise


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