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There Is No Darkness Here (repost)
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There Is No Darkness Here (repost) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
There is no darkness here only the twilight of another day softly spoken night words of love are all you’re allowed to say. Bring your heart into this quiet and lay down upon my breast breath slowly and enjoy the solitude of this rest. Worry not about the morrow it will be there when you wake put yourself into my hands you give and I will take. Give me your harried worries give me your day of stress I’ll take your cares and stroke them, soothe them with my caress. In perfect harmony, we’ll sit and wait til your soul is eased then with your smile I’ll know, that you have been well pleased. [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 01-01-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This poem leaves me well pleased, PdV. One of my favorites of yours. Breathtaking. Michael |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Such beautiful, loving words to give one rest....the most needed seldom offered gift. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I've always loved this one, deVine one. It gives such a feeling of tranquility. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So beautiful and comforting! Well done, PdV! Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
PDV: Exquisite..  HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I don't remember this one from before PDV, but it's very lovely. I like the calming effect that not only the words, but also the meter to this one have |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful Pdv, absolutely brethtaking! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Lovely. One could almost melt into this poen and taste, for a moment, the sweetness of heaven of earth. A fine New Year's gift. Chris |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Devine this certainly is a serene picture you paint! Leaves one with calming thoughts. BRAVO!!! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I've gotta agree - Relax and enjoy.....  |
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John Foulstone Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 100Australia |
Oh, that felt so good! If you're not too busy ... What? You're already spoken for? Have you by any chance got a twin sister? |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, beautiful poem Devine! I see it has left an effect on Foulstone here! Nathan |
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Coegwyr Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 35 |
I almost fell asleep reading this it was sooo soothing!! Can I make all your stuff my favorite ? Craig Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
As peaceful as a swing on the porch, or sunlight breaking through clouds... Very nice PDV |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
It's great to see this one again Poet. I don't get here often and seeing this is like catching up with an old friend. You are very gifted. . . |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
lovely! |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
PDV, you have calmed and moved me one more time! Beautiful! Tamera |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Now, isn't that the kind of spoken love we all want and need to hear? Wonderfully written, Sharon... very well done, indeed! I believe I remember this one and it's good to read it again. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PoetdeVine, Rest and nest upon your breast, that sounds good to me. *L* Sy PS. One hell of a poem. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Just want you all to know how pleased I am that I could give you a moment of peace.. I must confess, I am renowned for my massages.. at work someone is always asking for one... so whether tis poetically or digitally, I can soothe away your cares!  |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is absolutely beautiful. Thanks for reposting it. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very tender and loving As is the poet, obviously Liz |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
Hi PdV! Simply lovely! Do you sing too?  |
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