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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
If I had to leave this world tomorrow I know what my last thought would be Though my life was now over There's not a luckier man than me To have had the love of one like you A greater treasure can't be found Been in the company of an Angel Though I'm just now Heaven bound If my life flashed before my eyes Ascending all those bright white stairs I'd see all the love you gave me And all that we both shared If I had the choice to start again Be sent to any time or space I'd come back to you, my one true love 'Cause you're my favorite place |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem! Isn't it funny how our favorite place isn't really a place at all... just in the company of a certain person... for where they are isn't just home, it's heaven? *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 01-04-2000).] |
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Dreamer_556 Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 34 |
That is such a great poem! I agree with suthern... it is strange as to how a person's favourite place is actually in another. ~*Dreamer*~ |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
How sweet this is!  |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thanks for your encouraging words. Much obliged!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, this is so sweet and tender! I love it! Denise |
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Justa Nobody New Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1 |
Lostboy, Great poem. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lostboy, you haven't been around much as of late, this is wonderful, love the emotions in ti |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very very nice LB, well done. '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
So this is where you've been hiding. I've been looking all over for a poem of yours. I was starting to go through withdrwal.  And what a treasue I have found. This is beautiful. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Denise, thanks for the sweet reply Justa, glad you liked Ruth, thanks, I'll be around more Kamla, enjoy your work just as much danni, what can I say, you know! thanks |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet |
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