Open Poetry #5 |
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Things to say and hear |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
There are a great many things, That I must say to you, But were do I start, And will you believe them true. They come from my heart, And from my soul, And I must tell you soon, For thats my only goal. And when you hear, What I whisper in your ear, Please stay with me, Becouse it's all sincere. I love you so much, And theres a whole lot more, But where do I begin, To keep from being a bore. And now that I've got you, I've all the time I need, For you to hear these things, As my heart bleeds. And with this said, Our love can grow more, And with you in my arms, My heart can soar! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very lovely ![]() |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
How sweet! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This poignant piece tugs at the heart. Its simple presentation makes it believable. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Simple and really lovely. Very beautiful. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nicely done. |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Beautiful , I love this one ![]() |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
Thanks evaryone for all the feedback |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
Damn, I really got to meet the guys who post poetry here... I never knew that men could be so sweet.lol Excellent poem, very touching! ![]() |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
Thanks Red. you know that anyone can be this nice if they want to be.lol |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! I enjoyed this! Denise |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hiway....nice job.....yanno? I was nice once, I just don't like to make a habit of it... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty write |
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