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highwayman
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since 1999-12-29
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Cookeville, Tennessee, usa

0 posted 1999-12-30 03:17 AM


There are a great many things,
That I must say to you,
But were do I start,
And will you believe them true.
They come from my heart,
And from my soul,
And I must tell you soon,
For thats my only goal.
And when you hear,
What I whisper in your ear,
Please stay with me,
Becouse it's all sincere.
I love you so much,
And theres a whole lot more,
But where do I begin,
To keep from being a bore.
And now that I've got you,
I've all the time I need,
For you to hear these things,
As my heart bleeds.
And with this said,
Our love can grow more,
And with you in my arms,
My heart can soar!


 

© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-12-30 04:42 AM


Very lovely  
Echo Rhayne
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Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-12-30 07:36 AM


How sweet!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

3 posted 1999-12-30 11:40 PM


This poignant piece tugs at the heart. Its simple presentation makes it believable.
Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
4 posted 1999-12-30 11:45 PM


Simple and really lovely.  Very beautiful.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Balladeer
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5 posted 1999-12-30 11:47 PM


Nicely done.
whiskey
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6 posted 1999-12-30 11:49 PM


Beautiful , I love this one  
highwayman
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since 1999-12-29
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Cookeville, Tennessee, usa
7 posted 2000-01-01 10:28 PM


Thanks evaryone for all the feedback
Red
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8 posted 2000-01-01 10:33 PM


Damn, I really got to meet the guys who post poetry here... I never knew that men could be so sweet.lol  Excellent poem, very touching!  
highwayman
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa
9 posted 2000-01-05 03:03 AM


Thanks Red. you know that anyone can be this nice if they want to be.lol
Denise
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10 posted 2000-01-05 10:55 AM


Very nice! I enjoyed this!

 Denise


Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
11 posted 2000-01-05 10:58 AM


Hiway....nice job.....yanno? I was nice once, I just don't like to make a habit of it...
passing shadows
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12 posted 2004-08-16 12:38 PM


pretty write
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