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For Love Of Buildings
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For Love Of Buildings |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
When I am thinking of you and feel the most alone. I will go to visit a building and walk the path you've come to have known. I try to see with your eyes, every wall, north, south, east and west. Every corner where the paint needs touching up, every toe space, every area of rest. Your words flowed like perfection. From the transcriber, I could listen and see with every projection. Adjust door pads. Properly seat ceiling tile. Check on coved backsplash, I could even hear you smile. You walked the building with an air of confidence. Perfection found you, the quality of your work is immense. Did you ever know I carefully hung on your every word? Knowing you were the translator for which the building needed to be heard. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Gemini - this is fantastic - with the eloquent lines of a well structured building. Well done! ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Gemini, Wonderful poem  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Gemini, this is exquisite! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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EnciNo Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 12 |
gem of a poem! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Severn, Whiskey, Echo Rhayne,EnciNo-Thank you very much for all your comments. They are appreciated! |
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