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Awakening
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Awakening " Gently I stir gently I rise Death of a newborn awakening Rapt with funeral arrangements What is the young girl learning Life's games? Or of ghost spirits flying free Stuttering, chattering, blindly seeing The annoyance of the death of a soul |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Oops! Whiskey, This poem is excellent! It's both thought-provoking and entertaining (as all of your poems seem to be). Nice job. . . |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
too nice to be buried in the back... sorry I missed this one.. very nice! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, thought provoking poem, Whiskey! Very well done! Denise |
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agony Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 18 |
Whiskey,nice poem it is very awakeing for sure.I like the touch you have with your words,they seem to be soft even though they are hard. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...what a thinker  |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Great for the thinker type thank you |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I like this Whiskey - it is deep, yet accessible. Great job! K '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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