Open Poetry #5 |
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To Wit (Hey wayoutwalt & Toerag...I think you both missed this one from Open #1) |
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Denise
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To Wit! < !signature-->Quite clever yarns I yearn to spin; Fun pithy verse to make folks grin; Is it a gift – could I not learn A witty phrase or two to turn? Amusing tales I’d love to tell Is there a chance – could I excel At giving folks a laughing fit; Could what I write cause sides to split? Although a clown I’d love to be Me thinks it’s but sheer fantasy; I’d better stick with other stuff -Romantic flights and weepy fluff… And let the masters handle wit -of which I’m not – I must admit And humbly wait the next great gag From ‘wayoutwalt’ and fun ‘Toerag’!! 9/99 Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-02-2000).] |
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suthern![]() ![]()
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Posts 20723Louisiana |
This was certainly worth a repost!!! *G* Great job... I can't write humor... but I can sure appreciate those who can! *G* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very cute Denise ![]() |
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Denise
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Thanks, Suthern and Ruth! I'm glad you liked it! I hope Walt and Toe get to see it this time around! Denise |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yes dear....I did miss this one....very well done..To gag...or to make someone gag..that is the question...LOL......thanks for the repost... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
LOL! excellent, denise! |
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Denise
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Thanks Toe and Doreen - glad you liked it! It's about as close as I have ever gotten to 'funny'! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I missed this too Denise...it is very cute!! ![]() A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Denise
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Thanks, Pepper! I'm glad you liked it! ![]() Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
okokoko i found it yuh o d yuh make me happy yuh i did miss this first time thanx for callin it to muh attention and yuh one witty ninny yuh are!! |
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Denise
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hehehehe....glad you liked it, Walt! ![]() Denise |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
ehhehe ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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agony Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
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Dsnyder,Ilike your style woman you made my sides split. |
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Denise
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Thanks for the great comments, Echo and agony! I'm glad I made you laugh! ![]() Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem Dsynder! It very freely and happy written. Nathan |
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Denise
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Thanks, Nate! Glad you liked it! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
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You've certainly given me a chuckle, and I don't even KNOW Toetrap and Watchoutwalt! Thanks! ![]() |
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Denise
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Thanks Claire! Now you've got me laughing! ![]() Denise |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
masters huh... I really think you fit into this category! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is cute Denise. Thanks for reposting it. I almost missed it this time. I think you could write anything you put your mind to and do it well. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise I missed this one also, my goodness. ![]() <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Denise
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Thanks, Master, Eloise and Rebecca for your kind comments! This was sure a fun one to write! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Denise |
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