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Denise
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0 posted 2000-01-02 12:49 PM


To Wit!

Quite clever yarns I yearn to spin;
Fun pithy verse to make folks grin;
Is it a gift – could I not learn
A witty phrase or two to turn?

Amusing tales I’d love to tell
Is there a chance – could I excel
At giving folks a laughing fit;
Could what I write cause sides to split?

Although a clown I’d love to be
Me thinks it’s but sheer fantasy;
I’d better stick with other stuff
-Romantic flights and weepy fluff…

And let the masters handle wit
-of which I’m not – I must admit
And humbly wait the next great gag
From ‘wayoutwalt’ and fun ‘Toerag’!!


9/99

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 Denise



[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-02-2000).]

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suthern
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1 posted 2000-01-02 01:01 PM


This was certainly worth a repost!!! *G* Great job... I can't write humor... but I can sure appreciate those who can! *G*
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-01-02 01:14 PM


Very cute Denise  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-02 02:42 PM


Thanks, Suthern and Ruth! I'm glad you liked it! I hope Walt and Toe get to see it this time around!

 Denise


Toerag
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4 posted 2000-01-02 03:03 PM


Yes dear....I did miss this one....very well done..To gag...or to make someone gag..that is the question...LOL......thanks for the repost...
doreen peri
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5 posted 2000-01-02 03:16 PM


LOL! excellent, denise!
Denise
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6 posted 2000-01-02 03:43 PM


Thanks Toe and Doreen - glad you liked it! It's about as close as I have ever gotten to 'funny'!

 Denise


Pepper
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7 posted 2000-01-02 05:11 PM


I missed this too Denise...it is very cute!!  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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Denise
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8 posted 2000-01-02 07:13 PM


Thanks, Pepper! I'm glad you liked it!  

 Denise


wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2000-01-03 10:36 AM


okokoko i found it yuh o d yuh make me happy yuh i did miss this first time thanx for callin it to muh attention and yuh one witty ninny yuh are!!
Denise
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10 posted 2000-01-03 01:33 PM


hehehehe....glad you liked it, Walt!  

 Denise


Echo Rhayne
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11 posted 2000-01-04 11:22 AM


ehhehe

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

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12 posted 2000-01-04 06:46 PM


Dsnyder,Ilike your style woman you made my sides split.

 

Denise
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13 posted 2000-01-04 06:50 PM


Thanks for the great comments, Echo and agony! I'm glad I made you laugh!  

 Denise


Nate Dogg
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14 posted 2000-01-04 06:59 PM


Great poem Dsynder! It very freely and happy written.

 Nathan

Denise
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15 posted 2000-01-04 07:04 PM


Thanks, Nate! Glad you liked it!

 Denise


Meadowmuse
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16 posted 2000-01-04 07:15 PM


You've certainly given me a chuckle, and I don't even KNOW Toetrap and Watchoutwalt!
Thanks!

Dear LadyClaire


Denise
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17 posted 2000-01-04 07:20 PM


Thanks Claire! Now you've got me laughing!  

 Denise


Master
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18 posted 2000-01-04 09:49 PM


masters huh... I really think you fit into this category!
Eloise
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19 posted 2000-01-04 10:50 PM


This is cute Denise.  Thanks for reposting it.  I almost missed it this time.  I think you could write anything you put your mind to  and do it well.
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20 posted 2000-01-04 11:04 PM


Denise I missed this one also, my goodness.      WELL DONE!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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Denise
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21 posted 2000-01-05 12:07 PM


Thanks, Master, Eloise and Rebecca for your kind comments!  This was sure a fun one to write! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

 Denise


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