Open Poetry #5 |
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Old Photo Albums |
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broker6 Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 132Bellevue, NE, Sarpy |
Old Photo Albums by ©Richard Budig 2000 House empty, house quiet . . . where have all the children gone? Grown and moved away, old woman, gone and left their trash behind . . . broken promises strewn about like so many dog poop stains on the pricey carpet they said they would keep safe from the beast. Go look at old photo albums, woman. Look at the pictures and see them before they took away your power. Or was it that you abdicated? Children can’t take power. Someone has to give it to them. Someone who doesn’t care anymore. Someone who no longer believes. And what was it about you, old woman, that killed your belief in yourself? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad. Well written. Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
An intriguing glimpse into a sad story. Would love to "hear" more. |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
So, so sad. Is all of life a tragedy with only split seconds of bliss? Something very important has been lost, and yet I know can be found. Keep writing, keep seraching. Thanks for the thought provoking poem. Chris |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Well said Mama Quack Quack,theres something much deeper here,thanks for sharing. |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very sad , Well written ![]() |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
very well said!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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