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From roof to bed
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From roof to bed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A poem from my distant past. From Roof to Bed Once abed, in deepest slumber, Peaceful and without encumber, I awoke to a rude invite, The sounds of piercing rain at night. I turned away, in half awake, From a dream now half opaque, Listening to the strident sound, Raging echoes off the ground. The air heavy, moist and full Smelt to me, of wet lambs wool. But I ignored this rank and bore Closed my eyes and slept once more. Rain had leaked from roof to bed And wet warmed, my woolen spread. And though I lay in candor arm, My sleep had won a brand new charm. When the sun did finally show, I was smiling, wet head to toe. For woolens wet comfort it seems, Stimulates the wildest dreams. I cannot tell you the ethereal scene But it ended in a physical mean. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Don't worry, dear, this was very explicit. And very funny. Liz |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
wonderful , So good  I like this |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh my! How hillarious!  Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, Glad you enjoyed the humor. *L* Sy Whiskey, Thanks for the wonderful comment. Denise, Thanks for the read and nice comment. *L* Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL....Seymore, you just shattered all my thoughts of you by posting this poem...just teasing, thought it was very funny |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Hoot, I've always had a strange sense of humor, but I'm glad you enjoyed the humor of this strange poem. *L* Sy |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...um....LOL..... gee, Sy... could you explain??? I'm having a blonde moment....  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... great one, Seymour!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I don't know Nan, Elizabeth thought it rather explicit? What's a blonde moment? *L* Sy Suthern, Did I really Well........ROLF. Thanks for the great. *L* Sy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, a blonde moment is when you sell your car for gas money! Enjoyed the read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Very funny, I'll have to remember that. Thanks for the comment see you wed. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
LOL Smiling here Sy!Loved the humor here...the last stanza was hilarious.. A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
LoL great poem What do blondes and a turtle have in common? oh wait thats um a bit inappropriate..hmmm how about... What do blondes and a screen door have in common? Darnit, thats to inappropriate too. Oh I know!!... What do blondes and a beer bottle have in common?? And yes, I am a natural blonde, I just choose to have artificial intelligence...unlike the people who dye their hair bonde to have artifical stupidity!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Thank you sweet Pepper *L* Sy Echo, Very clever, enjoyed your response thank you. |
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