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Jim Hastings
Junior Member

since 1999-12-22

Posts 23
Arizona

0 posted 1999-12-27 01:42 AM

Brothers

Two brothers born as one,
Shall be together till all is done.
One of light and one of dark,
Both of them shall play thier part.

Strong of arms and pure of heart,
He has been this way right from the start.

Sharp of mind and unmatched in magic,
Tis said his life shall be tragic.

Both devoted to thier art,
Nothing can ever tear them apart.
One will always forgive the other,
For no more reason than he is his brother.
The other will never forgive a wrong,
Biding his time till he is strong.

Made from the same mold,
Yet different in ways untold.
Child of darkness, child of light.
Only together can they make things right.

It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am?

Lukia
New Member

since 1999-12-27

Posts 1

1 posted 1999-12-27 01:59 AM

This is a very beautiful poem. It was very mysterious and I like it a lot.

Jim Hastings
Junior Member

since 1999-12-22

Posts 23
Arizona

2 posted 1999-12-27 02:54 AM

Thank you Lukia, and welcome to passions.

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

3 posted 1999-12-27 05:19 AM

Jim this is great!!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 1999-12-27 07:11 AM

Sounds pretty symbiotic.... too bad about the dark side, though....

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 1999-12-27 08:59 AM

Wonderful poem! Sounds like Cain and Abel...or Goofus and Gallant.
May the light continue in it and keep forgiving!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

6 posted 2000-01-28 09:49 AM

Worth another time up top.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

7 posted 2000-01-28 10:01 AM

Way ta go Jimbo.....Very good idea, well written....Lykt'it!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2000-01-28 10:06 AM

Jim,
Interesting, enjoyed the read.

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