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Open Poetry #5

Will the Sun Rise?

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-01-27 12:32 PM

With the passage of time
Comes the deepening of love
Like the darkening day
In the setting of the sun
Changing shades of colored sky
All fading to blackest night
Holding steady, all feelings the same
Constantly avoiding the light

But she, in my arms remains
As the blissful sleep enfolds me
I trust my soul to her
So in the morning I might see
And behold all that I am
With an opening of her waking eyes
After a night like this I wonder,
Will the sun ever rise?

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

1 posted 2000-01-27 01:12 PM

JML- yes the sun will rise again. Love your poetry. you have a way with words.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2000-01-27 01:14 PM

Beautifully romantic!!!! Your words ar full of meaning!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-01-27 03:12 PM

Wonderfully romantic

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-01-27 07:29 PM

Loved your poem, very romantic
tracie

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

5 posted 2000-01-27 08:48 PM

Ah, but I think in this case the more pertinent question is -- would you want it to?

Tender and lovely -- a wonderful read.

--Kess

Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...

--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

6 posted 2000-01-28 09:53 AM

Skyfyre, high praise indeed from you. Plus an interesting question, and i think the answer here would be NO.

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