Open Poetry #5 |
Gratification |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Gratification Gratification comes from the heart, and mind not from the wallet. The wallet at times may help, but a wallet with no heart and mind is deprived from the very start. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, how true!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I agree.....words to think about LD! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ain't that the truth! Great poem, Gloria! Denise |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and it works both ways... those wallets with no heart - and those without a heart who are out looking for wallets..... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
If you come up with a few more like this, you could write a book, "Maxims by Gloria". I liked the poem Liz |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Amen to this L.D. What comes from the heart goes to the heart!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh how true and a wallet with no money is deprived too I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having love will last forever. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Exactly, Lost Dreamer! Short and to the point! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A big Amen to this!! Love it!! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thanks to all of you for reading and understanding. I wrote this before Christmas as I was feeling the material reality that stores use to brainwash us into buying there products, when in reality what we give of ourselves for others is more gratifying then any item a store could sell us. Thanks again, I guess I'm just getting old. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sometimes it takes as little as a poem like yours for some gratification...Well done Dreamer... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, LD!!! |
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