Open Poetry #5 |
It Takes Two (Found it Nan) |
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
IT TAKES TWO It always take two to erase the emptiness. No matter what I do, I just can't face it alone. I can stand on the rooftop and shout to the heavens, Or dwell over sins for which I may never atone. I can bow at the altar, I can silently pray. I can write, I can sing, I can play the guitar. I can read self help books every hour of the day. I can cast a blank wish on a falling star. But it always takes two to make this one man smile. To reach the bliss of heaven, to make the angels blush. To dance across the clouds in ecstasy, To recline on dreams, velvet and plush. To ride the waves of passion, pure and bold. With the zest of a tempest, the awe of fine art. Or to tell the story Time, so many times before, has told. It always takes two to break one heart. Michael Anderson It's the little things you take for granted, That'll mean the most to you when they're gone. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Michael! So beautiful! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful poem, Michael! Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... Awesome - Why didn't we put this on your new website??? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It takes two to make this poem so appreciated....you to write it and me to read it...you did and I do, very much. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful poem! But what did I expect? Nothing but the best from you of course! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well done Michael |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful Michael--makes me so glad to be part of a two. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Michael: Did you have to make me cry??.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
The 3rd stanza is my absolute favorite - - in a very dreamy & romantic sense...The whole poem was great, but the 3rd one really moved me...Glad you brought this poem "back" ? Wonderfully & delicately written babe... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Absolutely beautiful Michael!!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very true! Well done and well said. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a joy to find back here in the archives! |
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