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The order of disorder
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The order of disorder |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The order of disorder Of all the effects that lays low this man, Is the intrusion of a wives cleaning plan. Although disorder is the rule of my lay, There is order in the turmoil of my way. Each heap to me a specific pile of stuff, Though it looks like the acme of scruff. It is to my mind, filed in my order. But to hers, it's the height of disorder. I cannot put a lock on some of my goal, For she has free access to all of my soul. But my garden blooms flowers in sensitive soil. Not to be transplanted by cleanings foil. So now precious time is lost you see, To put back disorder, makes sense to me. And I am saddened and she is remiss, But I'm sure it will all clear with a kiss. When I was young t'was my personal hell. But now the bells toll the sound of, Oh Well. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
On my desk, disordered order Is the order that I know Until my secretary comes And fixes it, her face aglow And then she realizes that Her work to me didn't fix a thing For now disorder rules my mind Cause I cannot find anything I know the feeling, Sy I liked your poem, Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, I know your pain my friend. . . A place for everything and everything in its place. . . Excellent as always. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, I too suffer from this affliction , however I refer to it as " a place for everything and everything all over the place " . Guilty of disorderly conduct and sentenced to the "stute". Bailiff , see this man out! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice work Seymore...guilty of the same |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Just as your wife it bothers me For piles look like much debris They scream for order, don't you see? And quite in need of cleaning's spree! To each his own, Is what I say What floats your boat, what makes your day Whatever helps the poet write Whatever makes his soul take flight!  Great poem, Seymour....Seymour....is that you under that pile?! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I can see you have the same problem. I guess it is a common one. Love Sy Sven, Wise words, thanks for the comment. Dr, Enjoyed your remarks thanks. Hoot, We disorderlies have to stick together. *L* Denise, Great little poem, yes that's me under the pile. *L* |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
LoL, boy can I relate! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Organized Chaos..... Yep - I can relate - Except I do it to myself....  Whenever I organize all those "piles" I can't find anything for weeks!!!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...Oh well, indeed.. |
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