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Your excalibur
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Your excalibur |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Your excalibur The verbal excalibur, faith, Drawn out of the rock of deed, Acts an unusual wraith, To fill the chasm of need. Without which we would turn to stone. Like a lava flow black and cold. The blindfold of being alone, Would mould the very threshold. Spears of cruelty, shafted points Sink deep in the meat of chaos. Barbs rip the targets anoint And pin the heart to a cross. The slice of excaliburs blade, Will passage the sightless night. Its act of faith, kills masquerade And makes the candle grow bright. The sharp of its edge gifts our goal. Wield it well and endow your soul. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I always keep it by my side, and use it only when needed. And mine is very sharp! This is a wonderful poem. You wield words like a sharp edged sword. Love ya Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thank you for the read and very nice comment. Love Sy |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Sey, I have met with excalibur! you have discribed him to a T... Very Nice my friend. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
nice subject,nice flow,nice poem  Patrick B |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tori, Thank you for the nice comment. Patrick, Thank you for the nice, nice. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful poem Seymore |
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