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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2000-02-04 09:53 PM

The lost thought

It was so quiet
creeping out from the disorder
into the back row
to wait a turn.
It went unnoticed
until I felt
the warm spot in the place
where it had been.

I listened,
hoping that an echo
lingered in the crowded hall
caught between the lines
borrowing time from some importance,
but it was to late.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-02-04 10:16 PM

Martie, I had to come back and read this again. At first I didn't get it........ you moved me. This is so intense. WOW!-SEA

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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2 posted 2000-02-04 10:20 PM

This happens to me all the time! What a wonderfully creative way of explaining it!

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-02-04 10:22 PM

Martie-
Oh, can I ever identify with this.
When that little thought has taken flight ...
I always hope for it to return.
Alas, it often doesn't.

Simply put, you're a magnificient poet !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Balladeer

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4 posted 2000-02-04 10:25 PM

What a unique way to describe it. Martie, you are blessed.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 2000-02-04 10:30 PM

I like how you explained this. I agree with Marge. Often it doesn't return!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2000-02-05 09:40 AM

You simply amaze me at times

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2000-02-05 09:23 PM

Sea--Thanks for your wow.

Denise--I'm glad I'm not the only one

Marge--Thank you friend for the magnificient

deer--to be blessed would be wonderful

White Dove--Think of all those lost thoughts floating around somewhere

Ruth--the feeling is mutual. Thanks

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