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He Loves Her More
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He Loves Her More |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
He loves her more than Earth and sky He loves her, and she questions why He loves her always With constant, unwavering mind Though not of the same kind, Nor made of the same mold; But to have and to hold She’s still the one he loves And loves her only He sits there thinking of How he too can feel lonely He loves her more than any mortal thing He loves her, more than anything He loves her always With undying honor and grace; No matter what kind of face Outwardly he might portray, Nor the words he might not say He realizes how much love he holds For her and how it’s so real When suddenly he cries at the cold Which she must sometimes feel He loves her more than time itself He loves her, equal to himself He loves her always With never-ending fire and passion And when his time is done, Due to his special stubborn will, She’ll see, he loves her still |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is a great example of every relationship at times!!!! I loved your images!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML- I liked the way you expressed this. Most succinct line that says so much: 'He loves her, equal to himself' WOW ! Hard to measure that much love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lucky lady. It must be nice to be loved so much. I hope you tell her often. Very beautiful poem Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
For some reason, this really touched me. It likes me much  |
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d.schultz Junior Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 43 |
JML~~~ My husband read this and said see.. this is exactly what I am trying to tell you... thanks.... he was able to tell me throug your poem.... wonderful poem, now I get it ds |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Loving someone as yourself is the best kind of love that there is! This is beautiful, JML! Very nice! Denise |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
To everyone: Thanks so much, I am blushing. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm going to send this poem RIGHT NOW to my friend. . .I think that she'll finally get it with these words. . . Thank you JML. . . your words are exactly what I needed. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Wow....i dont have any words to say to that to repay your kindness. Thats sorta why i wrote it at the time, to explain things better than i can say it.... Thanks |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you amaze me.. you move me... this poem proves everything i said to you. stalking you with pleasure, your jm |
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