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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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0 posted 2000-02-05 03:57 PM


He loves her more than Earth and sky
He loves her, and she questions why
He loves her always
With constant, unwavering mind
Though not of the same kind,
Nor made of the same mold;
But to have and to hold
She’s still the one he loves
And loves her only
He sits there thinking of
How he too can feel lonely

He loves her more than any mortal thing
He loves her, more than anything
He loves her always
With undying honor and grace;
No matter what kind of face
Outwardly he might portray,
Nor the words he might not say
He realizes how much love he holds
For her and how it’s so real
When suddenly he cries at the cold
Which she must sometimes feel

He loves her more than time itself
He loves her, equal to himself
He loves her always
With never-ending fire and passion
And when his time is done,
Due to his special stubborn will,
She’ll see, he loves her still


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
devina
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1 posted 2000-02-05 06:38 PM


This is a great example of every relationship at times!!!! I loved your images!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-02-05 07:22 PM


JML-
I liked the way you expressed this.
Most succinct line that says so much:

'He loves her, equal to himself'

WOW !  Hard to measure that much love.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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3 posted 2000-02-05 08:38 PM


Lucky lady. It must be nice to be loved so much. I hope you tell her often. Very beautiful poem
Liz

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2000-02-05 10:03 PM


For some reason, this really touched me. It likes me much  
d.schultz
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5 posted 2000-02-05 10:23 PM


JML~~~ My husband read this and said see.. this is exactly what I am trying to tell you... thanks.... he was able to tell me throug your poem.... wonderful poem, now I get it    ds
Denise
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6 posted 2000-02-05 11:01 PM


Loving someone as yourself is the best kind of love that there is! This is beautiful, JML! Very nice!

Denise

PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2000-02-07 12:45 PM


To everyone: Thanks so much, I am blushing.
Sven
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8 posted 2000-02-07 12:48 PM


I'm going to send this poem RIGHT NOW to my friend. . .I think that she'll finally get it with these words. . .

Thank you JML. . . your words are exactly what I needed. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA
9 posted 2000-02-07 01:08 PM


Wow....i dont have any words to say to that to repay your kindness. Thats sorta why i wrote it at the time, to explain things better than i can say it....
Thanks

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2000-03-14 10:17 PM


you amaze me..
you move me...
this poem proves everything i said to you.
stalking you with pleasure,
your jm

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