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Moment With You
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Moment With You |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sometimes in the dark like this I get a desire for you like this Want to feel, want to feel your kiss Don’t want to lose out on so much bliss Things I need to learn so much Have to feel, to feel your touch Never will it be too much Gracing me with your saving touch With you I know all With you when darkness falls I don’t heed anyone else’s call Time to stop, time to end it all I need to stop it fast Need to make this moment last (Sorry for the close posts, but they are kind of companion pieces) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very passionate, my kind of poetry here! Corinne |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you so much, more are coming... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
So warm and tender, we are now overbound with romantics!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beautiful.. My kind of poetry to. Excellent piece  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes in the dark like this I get a desire for you like this Want to feel, want to feel your kiss Don’t want to lose out on so much bliss Things I need to learn so much Have to feel, to feel your touch Never will it be too much Gracing me with your saving touch BIG SIGH oh man...what I wouldnt give...to have a poem like this written for me... can i rent you out for awhile  |
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