Open Poetry #5 |
I See My Love |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I see my love pictured among the clouds On a day without the grey Floating before my eyes upon blue Like I’ve never seen until today She is beauty personified She is sunrise on the water I always shield my mournful eyes From her, Heaven’s daughter I clutch my chest and open my mind To a dream I continue to see A tender reaching hand, Reaching out for me And millions of stars in darkness So black, like shining jewels, Surrounding her in royal majesty In this dream in which she rules And I, out of all the suitors, Kneel to take that tender reaching hand To become immortal as the sea It’s waves crashing against the sand I see my love pictured everywhere And everywhere I look I see, My love’s face shining down smiling, And her standing there beside me |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML, Romantic! This is so......wow! Wish it was for me! -SEA |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
May your beautiful dream come true! This is very lovely! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Surrounding her in royal majesty In this dream in which she rules And I, out of all the suitors, Kneel to take that tender reaching hand To become immortal as the sea It’s waves crashing against the sand I see my love pictured everywhere And everywhere I look I see, My love’s face shining down smiling, And her standing there beside me YA got me with this one... very romantic...and you know how I love you on your knees *S* just wanted you to know...stalking you still in open 5 |
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