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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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0 posted 2000-02-04 05:36 PM


I see my love pictured among the clouds
On a day without the grey
Floating before my eyes upon blue
Like I’ve never seen until today
She is beauty personified
She is sunrise on the water
I always shield my mournful eyes
From her, Heaven’s daughter
I clutch my chest and open my mind
To a dream I continue to see
A tender reaching hand,
Reaching out for me
And millions of stars in darkness
So black, like shining jewels,
Surrounding her in royal majesty
In this dream in which she rules
And I, out of all the suitors,
Kneel to take that tender reaching hand
To become immortal as the sea
It’s waves crashing against the sand
I see my love pictured everywhere
And everywhere I look I see,
My love’s face shining down smiling,
And her standing there beside me


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-02-04 05:51 PM


JML, Romantic! This is so......wow!   Wish it was for me! -SEA
Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-04 05:52 PM


May your beautiful dream come true! This is very lovely!

Denise

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-03-23 12:06 PM


Surrounding her in royal majesty
In this dream in which she rules
And I, out of all the suitors,
Kneel to take that tender reaching hand
To become immortal as the sea
It’s waves crashing against the sand
I see my love pictured everywhere
And everywhere I look I see,
My love’s face shining down smiling,
And her standing there beside me

YA got me with this one...
very romantic...and you know how I love you on your knees  *S*

just wanted you to know...stalking you still
in open 5

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