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Enotneicna
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0 posted 2000-02-04 04:11 PM



waking in the night
rearranging my pillow over my arm
and settling into that comfortable position
my hand comes to rest
craddled in yours
your thumb traces the countour of my finger
then ever so slightly closes to caress my hand
I fall back to sleep
a smile upon my heart.


 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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SEA
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1 posted 2000-02-04 04:14 PM


Enotneicna, I know that feeling. So warm and loving. This is so very nice!- SEA  
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2 posted 2000-02-04 10:25 PM


Very sweet and romantic!

Denise

Enotneicna
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3 posted 2000-02-04 10:27 PM


Sea.....this happened early this morning, and made me think of how many other times it has happened.  When I got up I wrote this.  Glad you enjoyed it.

dsnyder.....we are all hopeful romantics I think.
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 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!




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4 posted 2000-02-04 10:28 PM


Aww!  So sweet!  

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Which way is right for you,
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5 posted 2000-02-04 10:33 PM


Very enjoyable reading. Thank  you for the glimpse.
Enotneicna
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6 posted 2000-02-05 05:23 AM


Thank you for your kind words and for enjoying my gift.  My reward comes with the sharing.

 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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7 posted 2000-02-05 07:18 AM


So tender.
Just one of the 'tiny' little pleasures
life affords us.
Thank you for sharing this.
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2000-02-05 08:56 AM


A very precious glimpse into your life
Well done
Liz

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