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A Friend In Time
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A Friend In Time |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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A Friend In Time Tides of passion Admired by the Moon and the sun Divide our devotion Causing to run wild Our emotions Trust, faith and Patience, An emotional Anchor Pulling us down To slowly drown… But, our love is strong Our love soaked hearts Together, they do belong. Knotting our love Closely, intertwined Joining our souls Together in Rhyme Lasting throughout Dimensions, Facets and time! Dark Angel What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..the ultimate..to have someone by your side through eternity...very good DA!  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent writing, angel! |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
I really like your poem. Chris Goodman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Dark Angel!  There's nothing better in life than that!Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA this most excellent! You blow me away! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Good poem...friends are the essence of our beings. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oooh...made me feel witchy...I LIKE feeling witchy! Thanks! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very well written. I enjoyed this one Good work Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much for taking the time to read this and for your kind replies. I aprreciate them very much. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark Angel- This is as fine a piece as I've seen. Your pieces just keep getting better. Great muses you must have. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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