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Open Poetry #5

Heaven's Fall

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-03 05:32 PM

Morning will come, that much is proven true
Though the night is endless when all alone
For time itself never shall misconstrue
That which Heaven can no longer condone
If it falls amongst love and mortal men
A happier place this would surely be
Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea

These things speak of what may come to pass
Yet existed beside me all the while
For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 2000-02-03 07:34 PM

"Earth has no sorrow that heaven can't heal" ~Thomas Moore

nice poem

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-03 08:07 PM

Very lovely poem, JML!

Denise

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

3 posted 2000-02-04 09:18 AM

Thanks you ladies very much. This was one of my few new ones, and I hope to get back on track one day.

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-02-04 09:28 AM

I think your track is back!

This reads very well, and I enjoyed the uplifting spirit in which it was written.

Claire

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2000-02-04 09:34 AM

I hope it is Claire, this is one of only 2 maybe new ones among the ones I am posting.
I think I need to quit my job and just write...oops, I got bills *S*.

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