Open Poetry #5 |
The History of Wannabes |
Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
When first we came down from the trees Not all of us did aim to please Most improved by vast degrees Except the race of Wannabes Though they learned to walk erect And passed for us in most respects Motivation they were lacking To throw the spear or go game tracking Content to lie by other's fires They dreamed of that which to aspire When embers cooled for want of wood They pondered who among us should Re-kindle that which kept them warm So one of us who I'll call Norm Would set off deep into the night To bring the wood to make things right And so on down through history We co-exist with Wannabes And things get done when need arises By those like Norm who wear no guises Sometimes nonsense isn't . |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
The Moose has spoken... so that we shall see The all to sad truth... of the Wannabe A more accurate tale could not be told. Well done Dr. Moose. PS. Liked Second Op. Fudd has nothing on ya. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Andrew, Glad you liked , but I think Fudd's got it in for you now . You better watch out for him ! I heard he was saying some rather challanging things about you on second opinion . |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hey, I know some of these Wannabes! Such a slothful bunch, aren't they?! Denise |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Dr. Moose... never fear, I've peeled and cooked the little spud. Stop by for some Fudd Stew if you get a chance. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I once met some Wannabes while staying with the Usetobes. They brought along the Hadtobes, but now there's only Norm & me. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Dr.! Dr.! Can you help me please?? I don't know what to say hehe...but I will miss reading your poetry while I am gone, but take care!! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh geesh... Who let serenity into the 'stute? I like Justin Sanity, myself... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Clever, quirky...enjoyed it. Claire |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Doctor... Kudos from a Wannabe poet! *G* |
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