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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2000-02-02 06:06 PM


When first we came down from the trees
Not all of us did aim to please
Most improved by vast degrees
Except the race of Wannabes

Though they learned to walk erect
And passed for us in most respects
Motivation they were lacking
To throw the spear or go game tracking

Content to lie by other's fires
They dreamed of that which to aspire
When embers cooled for want of wood
They pondered who among us should

Re-kindle that which kept them warm
So one of us who I'll call Norm
Would set off deep into the night
To bring the wood to make things right

And so on down through history
We co-exist with Wannabes
And things get done when need arises
By those like Norm who wear no guises



 Sometimes nonsense isn't .



© Copyright 2000 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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1 posted 2000-02-02 06:22 PM


The Moose has spoken... so that we shall see
The all to sad truth... of the Wannabe

A more accurate tale could not be told. Well done Dr. Moose.  

PS. Liked Second Op.  Fudd has nothing on ya.


Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2000-02-02 06:40 PM


Andrew,
Glad you liked , but I think Fudd's got it in for you now . You better watch out for him !
I heard he was saying some rather challanging things about you on second opinion .

Denise
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3 posted 2000-02-02 07:59 PM


Hey, I know some of these Wannabes! Such a slothful bunch, aren't they?!

Denise

Andrew Scott
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4 posted 2000-02-02 08:26 PM


Dr. Moose... never fear, I've peeled and cooked the little spud. Stop by for some Fudd Stew if you get a chance.
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2000-02-03 03:51 AM


I once met some Wannabes
while staying with the Usetobes.
They brought along the Hadtobes,
but now there's only Norm & me.

Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 2000-02-04 01:59 AM


Dr.!  Dr.!  Can you help me please??  I don't know what to say hehe...but I will miss reading your poetry while I am gone, but take care!!

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


Nan
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7 posted 2000-02-04 08:03 AM


Oh geesh... Who let serenity into the 'stute?
I like Justin Sanity, myself...  

Meadowmuse
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8 posted 2000-02-04 09:15 AM


Clever, quirky...enjoyed it.  


Claire

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9 posted 2000-02-04 09:53 AM


Well done, Doctor... Kudos from a Wannabe poet! *G*
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