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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Afterglow ~Marge Tindal~ In the afterglow of love, I fell in love again. The freshness of it all overwhelming from within. Not a moment passes, that you do not reclaim, the after-the-loving, afterglow I am in love again. Hold me for the second time within your arms so strong. A love like this is Heaven-sent. It will last long after the afterglow is gone. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Bad Boy Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 78 |
You must of had a good night  Another one with feeling from the heart. You are one heck of a talented young lady  Thank`s again for sharing your feelings with us. < !signature-->The Devil Made Me Do It. [This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-25-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love the feelings this poem decribes. you write with a warmth that comes thru in your words, very nice. Janet Marie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Glowing words, Marge! Simply beautiful! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
And I thought there was nothing better then afterglow. Lovely poem, Marge. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Good Gravy Good Lady!!!! My husband will thank you later tonight! Wow!  -SEA |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Outstanding poem Marge. Truly beautiful. I am a hopeless romantic, so you struck a chord with me. Jfreak |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Janet Marie- Thank you so much for your thoughts and comments. Denise- My earnest appreciation to you for being such a loyal reader. Martie- You just may be right ! Thank you, lady. SEA~ LOL ! I'm glad HE liked it ! Jfreak- Ahhhhh ! An oxymoron with a twist- if you're 'romantic' you can't be 'hopeless' ! Thank you for your comments. ~*Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful verse, and did you notice how Bad boy gravitates to your lovely poetry. (I think he's softening up a little) Love ya Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dear Marge(y) this is just lovely! So smooth and sensual...great work as usual!  K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I love this, Marge. Beautifully worded, tender love poem, and just how I feel about my husband! Also, I've noticed the shapes of your poems lately, and enjoy them very much. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"The after the loving afterglow"....what a wonderful phrase. Yours must light the morning sky with its brilliance. Wonderful thoughts, Marge. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Marge This is very nice and so romantic Thank you for such nice poem Turn off the light to see the afterglow The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend- So pleased that you found it lovely. Kamla- Thank you sweetie. And thanks again for the picture ... cutie pie. Rosemary- Thank you always for your read. With such tenderness so evident between you and Dale ... I'm sure he feels the same. Love takes many 'shapes', eh? Balladeer- Hello, love ... so glad you enjoyed it. You always notice just the right things. Helmut Becker- Nature does turn off the light each evening ... then suddenly we are given one last flicker of the 'afterglow'. So very glad you liked it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
Lovely sentiments. Thank-you for the read. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I just wanted you to know how your poems and e-mails always leave the spouce and I with a wonderful glow. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful words |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful Marge, oh how I will miss these wonderful words of yours! *hugs* Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WolfsMate- Oh, thank you. I often think that 'sentimental' is my middle name. Lucky- If I send a glow to your hearts, I feel the warmth in return. Hoot- So sweet of you. Echo- My thoughts will find their way to you. On ~spirits wing~ they fly. Love ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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