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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
I looked in the eye's of a child of mine I saw not a person I recognized I saw no shadow's of long ago dreams I saw not wanting for whimsical things I saw not the butterfly dance on the rose I saw not the little boy with dust on his nose I saw not the child, he'd gone too far What I saw was a man as he reached for his stars © tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
My oldest is definately reaching ... but he must have short arms  Rex }<{{{{o> Great job tori |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tori, you made me cry this morning! How wonderful this is! My little boy is in there sleeping still, dreaming of Tonka trucks, not leaving his Mommie!  Great Poem!! -SEA |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Those arms will grow in directions that will astound you Rex.. stand back.. but never far... Awe SEA... take in every second of the tonka trucks..for makeing sure he makes the payments on the big one's is a job at hand....lol... Thank you both for reading.. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow Tori! This was fantastic! They grow so darn fast don't they? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love this...they do grow too fast |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can sure relate to this! This is short and sweet, Tori! Denise |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks Guy's and yes they do grow too fast! If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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