Shades Of Blue........ (RG's Challenge)

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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2000-02-02 10:39 PM

If I could paint a picture
Of these visions in my head.
It would tell a story
Of why these tears were shed.

And there upon the canvas
Would be a portrait of you.
The colors I would use
Would be different shades of blue.

If I could play a song
To show you how I feel.
You would hear a melancholy tune.
A broken heart I would reveal.

The solemn strum of the harp
Would play a mournful sound.
To guide these lonely teardrops
As they softly hit the ground.

If I could have one wish.
I know what it would be.
To find the love we lost
And bring it back to me.

Then a brilliant sparkle would crown the sky.
And together our hearts would once more blend.
For watching you smile makes my life worthwhile.
And a happy person I would be again.

[This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 02-02-2000).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-02-02 10:46 PM

Eloise-

You more than met the challenge.
I find this 'just about perfect' to me !
~Marge~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-02 11:25 PM

Very beautiful, Eloise! Challenge well met!
Denise

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2000-02-03 01:55 AM

Wow Eloise...how lovely!! So very sad...I can relate to this!! It seems you wrote a poem about how I feel!! Almost as if I had asked you to put words to my pain!!

Well Done!!

Take Care
Bridgette

Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2000-02-03 10:13 AM

what a lovely post to a challenge

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

5 posted 2000-02-03 10:44 AM

Eloise: A lovely reply to my challenge and so well met...thank you..

HUGS

The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

6 posted 2000-02-03 10:55 AM

I'd have to agree, it seems you've met the challenge...and then some. Well done, Eloise! I enjoyed the read and the visual journey.

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

7 posted 2000-02-03 06:56 PM

Marge, thank you. You always have such kind words to say.

Denise, thank you also.
Bridgette, I hope you feel better. Heartbreak is always a hard thing to go through.
Ruth, thank you for the lovely.

RainbowGirl, thank you for the challenge. It's always fun to work around a line.
Sally, I'm glad you had a good journey.

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