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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca 
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LOVE ME Wether or not tommorow, still holds promises of things to be, does not seem quite so important anymore, for I've opened my eyes and now I can see. Tommorow doesn't really matter, and yesterday is part of the past. Today is all that we really have, it is the only moment that ever lasts. And I am through planning my life, on a path that I've never touched. I'm ready to embrace my life now, I finally realize that I am worth that much. So if you want to love me, love me now, before the chance is no longer ours. We've already wasted so much time, so many lonely comfortless hours. My mind is overflowing with thoughts of you, my love is yours for the taking. But I fear that with each passing day, My heart is in jeopardy of breaking. So please listen to my plea, if you think that you can find a way, Forget about yesterday, don't think of tommorow, I'm here right now, love me today.. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
this was very lovely. Can't wait to hear more from you "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Lynn Wood New Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 8Manchester, N.H. |
Red, you said it so well. I connected quite easily. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! Now is all we really have. Well stated! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...so very true  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Red: Wow!...Can I relate to this.. Kudos HUGS The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"Today is all that we really have". This is so true. Well written poem. DH |
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Rosalind Palafox
Registered
MemberPosts 88 |
"YEah! Take me NOw!notice me!!" of course, these things always happen. why are they so blind? "Love comes but never goes, for if it ever went, it was never love to begin with." |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Carpe Diem! For what have we to live for, but for moments which shall turn to memories? Bravo! "Life is a noun, and living no more or less a matter of adding adjectives." Carnivores of Light and Darkness -Alan Dean Foster |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Red, I like the message in this poem a lot! While reading it, I saw a few things that I would like to suggest, if I may be so bold and if you are open to them, email me at cmbailey@jps.net. Corinne |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Red, I can relate very well to this. This is just fantastic!-SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Brilliant poem, Red. You on-point too! Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Red, An open invitation, good idea. Enjoyed the poem. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Whew, I could not have said it better. If it were true of the one I think of every day, I'd probably be over there in a heartbeat! Excellent poem. |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Lovely poem, Red, it's all so true, but we never think of it at the time do we?! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A simple title..a simple request..a good poem...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You've read my heart, and spoken it so well Excellent poem Liz |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
Thank you all so much, and Corinne... I'm always open to suggestions, constructive criticism is always a good thing, you can feel free to email me also at melh79@hotmail.com...... thank you all again. |
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