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Open Poetry #5

feelings

catwomen
Junior Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 49

0 posted 2000-02-06 12:47 PM

Moments that we spent
Are all etched in my mind
Remembering your gently touch
Caressing my face.

I long to hold you close

Love that smile
On your face
Visions of our time together
Ever on my mind

You hold my heart
Only beats for you
Until we meet again my love.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-02-06 01:07 PM

CatWoman-
Wonderful sentiment.
Wonderful acrostic.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-06 04:48 PM

Very touching,Catwomen! A great acrostic, too!

catwomen
Junior Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 49

3 posted 2000-02-06 05:24 PM

thanks think I should send him a copy?

jascanvey
Member

since 1999-12-26

Posts 130
England

4 posted 2000-02-06 05:33 PM

Wow, yeah send it! You have nothing to lose and so much to gain.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-02-08 10:13 AM

"Remembering your gentle touch gently caressing my face". I love the feeling in this poem, so obviously I like your choice for a title. Sounds like a love worth pursuing. May romance meet you half way. James

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