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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Loneliness, A grey figure shrouded in an endless black robe, Carrying the aroma of bad memories and tears. It's voice is silent- so very eery, I am made to feel alone in the world- A soul survivor wandering scared. (FYI- I'm not lonely!  ) |
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Me2 Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 25Escondido, CA USA |
Very Nice, Zelda! I can feel the dark ... is there going to be more to this story? For my sake, don't stop here! thanks! Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Zelda, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
arrgghhhh, lil lassie - ye be not lonely, hey??? Incidently, this poem left me hanging, and I suspect other people, too! NO FAIR! Welcome to the Forums. I know you will find many friends in here are truly terrific people. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Zelda! This sure sounds like lonely to me!! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Ahh... I promise I will finish this!! Had to cut it short... dogs were whining to "go"!! Told you I wasn't lonely  So, look for more later.. I'm thinking I'll call it Wandering.... Z |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Welcome, Zelda. Very nice start. I'm anxious to see where you go with this. BTW, you don't have to be dark and lonely to write about it. ~Gene |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Zelda, Welcome! I also felt like there was more to this..... will look for it!  -SEA |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Girlfriend~ Like it so far~ Should have made the guys wait!~ Marie~ |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Welcome, Zelda...I hope you find a home here. It's a wonderful place. Now, about the ending...... hehehe |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
just had to welcome you, nice poem, nice name, lol, I used to be addicted to the nintendo game Zelda....had to quit cold turkey to get away from it lolol... |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Well, now that my essays are finished, I can thank.... u_gene- SEA- Almost finished with it Marie- I see you everyday  Sally S- Thanks for the welcome... happy ending? fc- I still am addicted to that game... LOL! |
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