Open Poetry #5 |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Life is a temptation for me To kill it For to stop the sound of music Changing my mood Into a trip down south To find love Running away from the cold cold north I found nothing but trouble I try to go back up Nowhere I would fit So I came back down I fitted o'right I got stuck in jail In the country somewhere Where I cannot see The sun on the earth shining I fell 10 feet underground monique |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Monique.....I am so glad to read you again. I do not know if the other news group made you feel like me or not, but I have almost.. I have stopped writing poetry. I need to stay just here to get my spirit back. Robert |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Hi monique ... your pastures sure havn't been very green by the sounds of things But coming here to Passions is a step in a better direction I agree with Robert ... the news groups were a bad adjective to reality Glad to have you with us Rex |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Thank you guys for saving my life from the beef bad bull. Olé! monique |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
Moniqueeeeeeee Hiiiiiiiii Its great to see you here .. about time too that you left that den of inquity ..lol Great poem btw .. and Happy New Year ..lol Check out Critical Analysis as well where i mostly post .. and Welcome ... Philip |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Phiiiiiliiiiiip This is too funny Being here And good Thanks to Rex I am overwhelm To read everyone's poem from the heart monique |
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