Open Poetry #5 |
Brian My Dream |
Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
BRIAN MY DREAM You came into my life so fast And gave me love I hoped would last Days went by and time stood still You took my heart and made a deal To me you promised to be true To cherrish my love for only you In your arms you'd hold me tight Thinking of me day and night You'd smile at me to make my day To win your heart I'd sit and pray With a ring and on one knee You sweetly whispered "marry me" To this I did not hesitate I married you my one soul mate This dream with you I hope comes true Brian baby, I love you! Dedicated to Brian....the love of my life.... I will always love you baby! |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Alina Le Ann, Brian's a lucky guy. Beautiful first post. Welcome to the forums, ~Gene |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alina- Very sweet. Hope it gets even better. Welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
I hope your love lasts forever. Nice poem. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Alina! This is a very beautiful love poem. I hope all your dreams come true! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lovely poem ! I love it |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
Thank you all so much for your comments! This being my first tim eto post a poem I was actually kind of scared of the replies I would get....I never expected things like these...and how you all replied so quickly....it ruly means a lot... thank you again Alina Le Ann |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
WELCOME TO THE FORUM Wonderful first post! did someone say baby? |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Alina Le Ann, Welcome to Passions. I'm with Paul Baby Baby! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful poem and a blessed couple. Life is good. James |
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