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jfreak
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since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

0 posted 2000-01-29 04:29 PM

I am a simple man
With an unsimple mind
"What's my kind like?"
You may ask me,
You may ask anyone!
To find the answer though,
Definately an uneasy task.
I tell you the truth,
that has been my search.
The reason for the upturned earth.
Hopefully you can wash away
my confusion and dillusion.
Beware my flood of tears,
if you succeed in your quest.
For that is all that is left.
Tears and Fears abound
in this one horse town
you call my soul.
Can you ever make me whole?

[This message has been edited by jfreak (edited 01-30-2000).]

Chris Goodman
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 92
Issaquah, Washington usa

1 posted 2000-01-29 04:50 PM

Hi there,
Thanks for sharing this piece. You have a lot of things you want to say!

Chris Goodman

simplyYRREHS
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 162

2 posted 2000-01-29 05:44 PM

Wow, jfreak...this one can have a multitude of meanings behind it. My answer (hehehe), yes, no, maybe. It depends on the interpretation. Enjoyed this a bunch!

Sherry

"The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-29 10:03 PM

This is great, Jfreak! Well done! And I see you got your picture up! Nice to see you, finally!

Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 2000-01-29 10:21 PM

Glad to finally see you! Sounds like a lot of soul searching going on? God can make ya whole...but you know that right?

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-01-29 10:39 PM

Can anyone really wash it all away? Liked this JFreak!

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

6 posted 2000-01-30 04:09 AM

WOW!!!!!

I never thought that I would get the type of responses that I have gotten for this one. Very encouraging. Thanks to everyone.

Jfreak

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2000-02-01 02:58 PM

Better late than never, huh jf???
Look at it this way.... I tell you a couple of days later that I like your poem, and it comes back for another lap around the forum...
I like it - I like it!!

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