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Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-01-31 05:03 PM



Into another silence,
Neither of us
Turning without
Initiating some new loveplay;
My own flesh burning
And yours scarcely
Cooler -
Yes is the only word we know

© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-01-31 05:10 PM


Love is INTIMACY's favorite word!
Loveplay is second.
Well done!
DH

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-01-31 05:23 PM


Beki, this is wonderful, enjoyed it much!  
love acrostics  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Beki
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
3 posted 2000-01-31 06:12 PM


Thanks Danny and Dark Angel..I have always enjoyed acrostics and every once in awhile I get the urge to play around with a few  
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-01-31 10:12 PM


Yowsers.....Yeah, I like this one "Yes is the only word we know" WOW!!! Great acrostic
Denise
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5 posted 2000-01-31 10:12 PM


This is beautiful, Beki!  

Denise

Beri
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 149

6 posted 2000-02-01 03:12 AM


Beki, I love this!  And the last line...what a perfect ending.  Its a beautiful acrostic!  Got any more for us?  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
7 posted 2000-02-02 01:22 PM


I too appreciate a good acrostic  
Loved This One !!


Jenny

Martie
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8 posted 2000-02-02 02:17 PM


Great job and I loved the last line.
Beki
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
9 posted 2000-02-02 07:33 PM


Thank you everyone, will play with these a little more I think  )
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