Open Poetry #5 |
Love Acrostic - Intimacy |
Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Into another silence, Neither of us Turning without Initiating some new loveplay; My own flesh burning And yours scarcely Cooler - Yes is the only word we know |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Love is INTIMACY's favorite word! Loveplay is second. Well done! DH |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beki, this is wonderful, enjoyed it much! love acrostics What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks Danny and Dark Angel..I have always enjoyed acrostics and every once in awhile I get the urge to play around with a few |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Yowsers.....Yeah, I like this one "Yes is the only word we know" WOW!!! Great acrostic |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Beki! Denise |
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Beri Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 149 |
Beki, I love this! And the last line...what a perfect ending. Its a beautiful acrostic! Got any more for us? If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be... |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I too appreciate a good acrostic Loved This One !! Jenny |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great job and I loved the last line. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you everyone, will play with these a little more I think ) |
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