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HelmutB
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0 posted 2000-01-31 12:20 PM


I was not leaving without saying “Good bye”
There are things that happened in life that are out of our control.
I’m fine don’t get me wrong.
I’m sorry but I have to let go.
Forgive me, I love you all.
I will be missing you all so endlessly and deep.
Please don’t reply I want be reading it. It would break my heart if I did.
I know how much you all care.
I will always keep you in my heart and will remember my time here with you.
God Bless you all and may all your dreams come true.

There are only a few times that I felt so sad in my life.


[This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 02-02-2000).]

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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 2000-01-31 12:25 PM


Helmut: Is this a poem to someone in particular or one saying you're actually going?..Because I'm not really sure but if it's the latter, you know the words of the song "Till we meet again"..

HUGS

 Memories give you the power to collect roses in the winter...

suthern
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2 posted 2000-01-31 12:30 PM


Helmut: If this is a goodbye to PIP, the sadness is shared... Godspeed, dear friend.
mariee66
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3 posted 2000-01-31 01:10 PM


Your poem is filled with sadness...
Not sure if you are addressing someone, or speaking of yourself...
Take care~
Marie~

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-01-31 01:12 PM


Helmut
Best wishes, keep writing, post from wherever, and we will read.
This is sad
Liz

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
5 posted 2000-01-31 03:15 PM


What???? You CAN'T leave!!! Devina forbids it!!! If you really are going, remem`ber how you've touched the heart of many...most of all mine- you dear man!!! Much love and hugs!!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

LngJhnAg
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6 posted 2000-01-31 03:26 PM


Good bye, Helmut - I sure hope this was a poem, and not a farewell.  You've brought a lot of class to the Forums.
Balladeer
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7 posted 2000-01-31 04:05 PM


Helmut...pas auf! Return again, friend.
Martie
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8 posted 2000-01-31 05:24 PM


Take care and find peace

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Denise
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9 posted 2000-01-31 10:40 PM


I'm sorry to see you go, Helmut.  
Please come back when you can.
Denise

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2000-01-31 11:12 PM


Helmut
If you should return to read this,
please know that you touched my heart.
My dear and gentle man ...
write me ...
please.
You're not the only one crying.
I love you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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11 posted 2000-02-02 07:18 AM


Helmut come back when the time is right...I'm going to miss your writing...it is top quality.   James
tori
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since 1999-06-18
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
12 posted 2000-02-02 08:48 AM


Helmut....  Oh I know how good you are.. but this one has me a bit worried? But I have not heard a good bye so I'll assume this is just another bit of your great works.

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
13 posted 2000-02-02 10:46 AM


Helmut my friend...I do not want you to leave here. I feel that your decision to do so has something to do with my decisions and that makes me sad. You are a part of this place and we all love you here. Please reconsider.
Ruth

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
14 posted 2000-02-02 08:43 PM


Please don't you guy's worry
It breaks my heart to see all your reply's
A "Muse" whispered to me in lonley night
the sorrow i have caused
In do time I will be back "moderatley"
It's an addiction I must addmit  
My family comes frist
Forgive I thought it would be easy
But it is not as I see
Ruth (Hoot_owl_rn), I did not mean to cause you sorrow. My "Good Bye" was not based on our converse. Forgive my friend for that I care.

In do time when I'm ready I will tell you the why I did what I did.
Keep the fast moving train of poetry going.
Love you all
Miss you too
Hugs all the way around
God Bless


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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