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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
These P A L P I T A T I O N S erupt from a heart once numb. The feeling of love before me has come. Impossible would I have thought before that love could come from nothing more than C O N V E R S A T I O N S resulting from online time shared. My innermost self to you I have bared. Remarkable this friendship that we have before us ~ a bond unconditional and gently amorous. The I N S P I R A T I O N S received from your tender, typed thought are truly amazing and inside my wrought angers and fears are replaced by something new ~ this love that exists between me and you. |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
very nice sherry, very beautiful, and yep, it happens  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very creative and sincere! DH |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful thoughts, Sherry. Just read those words with both eyes open, ok? Geez, I'm sounding like a father!! |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
danny and fc....THANKS! I had a lot of fun writing this one. Balladeer...or should it be "Daddy Deer"? EYES ARE WIDE OPEN, both of them. Know what you mean, and appreciate it...but know that "love" takes on many forms, and this not necessarily means I'm eloping tomorrow.  Simply in referrence to friendships online, and how they become very much a part of our "real" lives. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Sherry! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sherry- I like the creative thinking in this. You sound like a pretty smart cookie to me. I'm sure your eyes are wide-open !  ~*Marge*~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your presentation of these fine words is wonderful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sherry this is a beautifully inspired poem. Enjoy your new found friendship cause friends are very valuable. James |
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