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In Trouble, Plenty
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In Trouble, Plenty |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA 
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I know that I'm in trouble, plenty And the Thunderstorm's ready to blow, I don't need no TV Weatherman man To tell me what he thinks might show! For he might say it's sunny and pleasent And his words may be true as God's Book, But I know I'm in trouble, plenty When She turns and she gives me "that Look"! I know that I'm in trouble, plenty And no "sorry's" will e'er do the trick, When I've messed up and she gives those Glances Which cut me right down to the quick! Yes, no words then need ever be spoken For her Look tells me all that there is, She's had quite enough of my laziness-- And right now, she is plenty Pissed! I know that I'm in trouble, plenty E'ven when the Bank teller says I'm fine, Not overdrawn in all my accounts-- But overdrawn in my face and my mind! For to me, the worse thing that could happen Is for me to be proved a true Snook When the "Judge Judy" of my Life sets in Judgment And casts forth her Judgmentally bad Look! SO I know that I must do much better For her wrath, I Deserve, I suppose, But oh, what a strained relationship When at me,stern, she looks down her nose! I hope this time, won't be a life sentence-- But good behavior will get me paroled, And she loves me again, with her love all aflame And her Look says, "Come and let Love unfold!" "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
deleeme, what did you do?! Never mind I probably don't want to know! LOL  I hope she forgives you soon! Great writting. -SEA |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, David! Now see what you get for gettin' on her nerves...hehehe ROFL@Judge Judy look!!! I can picture it now! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL!! David are you being bad? haha...it reminds me of the one show on Home Improvements.....when they were in the shop talking about those "looks." haha...they could kill couldn't they? so stay in good graces! hehe the end sounds good, nothing like making up!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so cute I had to bring it up again! I also wanted to make a guess as to what you did that caused that look....spending too much time on your computer, maybe? LOL Denise |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Thank you all for your sympathy and consoling! Denise you hit it right on the head--Since she can't compete with the computer/internet & ICQ, like se could another woman--She uses her LASER LOOK to put me in place & cut me down to size--OUCH! And no kidding--She has one Fiercely Mean look when lets her negative feelings show!! Thanks to everyone--If I suddenly dissappear without a trace--please forward this message to the FBI. (Thanks) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Bank accounts are important, but so are Love accounts. Make lots of deposits and trouble a plenty will come around less often. (don't forget the roses!). DH |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
FBI ! LOL Will it help if I give Linda a big hug from here ? BIG HUG Linda !  Great poem David. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Thanks Danny, for the sound advice,I might try making a NIGHT DEPOSIT and see if that works. Thank you Munda, Some times I think thats the safest kind of Hug--but, from my stand point, not the most fun-- I just wonder-about my predicament-- are there any out there thinking--BEEN THERE-DONE THAT---??? |
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