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A reply to Spyro's "The Explanation"
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A reply to Spyro's "The Explanation" |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I just thought I would explain this time And give it in a little rhyme Some say it is the story of my life So I will now tell you about my plight So it happened that fateful day With the wind blowing causing trees to sway I was out walking alone When some human cast his stone He was aiming for my head But hit my foot instead I paid him a glance I wondered who could have such ignorance Only a human could be so dense As I watched him climb a fence I paid him no heed For a fight I did not need So I continued my little stroll Until I encountered this little troll He told me of a love so hot And that I may have a shot I left him standing there As I jumped up and took to the air Higher and highr I did soar Until the troll I could see no more I flew to the place of her rest I waited to see if he was correct Then I saw her land with all her grace All of my doubts, not a trace She was covered with gold and silver scales From her head to her tail She looked at me with those eyes I knew this was no disguise Her beauty I did behold Wishing her for me to hold As she walked my way Did my knees begin to sway Then she whispered in my ear All of the things I wanted to hear I wanted to stay there for all time Even if it was a crime She loved me like no other And pulled me out from under my cover Things were going great I even lost track of the date This were my memory starts to go black Somehow I managed to lose track I remember falling And hearing her calling I could feel her fire I knew would never tire Her love was so hot It burned me on the spot My wings are strong I wondered what I had did wrong Fallling I could not stop Until I completed this drop That is were I was found Laying on the ground A plausable explaination to how you found me and how I remember it. This story is true for me. It happened to me. Her love is so hot it has burned(scorched) this Dragon. P.S. Hope you like this Little_Spyro. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Well now there's just no shutt'n you up, is there? *joking* It looks like your writer's block has been unplugged. This poem is terrific! Keep it up.  Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very entertaining! Very good! I'm sure Sam will love it! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love it how these two stories come together ! Great poem |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
That you all so much. My writer's block has left and some of the reason why is all you great people in here. Yes I know it is long but felt like giving a proper tribute to Sam. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a nice tribute to her |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
You bet I like this! This is GREAT!  Good story, too...I wonder, did it happen in real life? (Of course, there would be no trolls around--I think, unless you count people like I.R.S. employees, etc.) In short, yes, I like it! Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Yes Spyro this did happen to me. As to the troll, I had to think of something to stir the imagination. The troll is the inner feelings I had and followed them. Thank you everyone again. Feels like home. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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