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Safwan Arekat
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since 2000-01-29
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0 posted 2000-01-30 02:50 PM





Love, A Memory

I remember love very well


I remember the love that I felt
You were very close to me then
A memory in my heart is kept
A memory from a dreamy heaven

I remember you talking to me
with your brown eyes smiling
and conceded to unspoken plea
as you moved into closer filing

I whispered a hushed tone in your ear
You allowed me a hesitant approach
aside you had brushed a strand of hair
"tell me, and fear not a reproach"

How had they been in wit abound?
those words I said to win your laugh
My heart a dance to twirl around
at music in the trumpet’s draft  

Ever so more I was mighty pleased
in joy I bathed and in glee I basked
as a touch of silken skin appeased
the prayer which my god I asked

*

"Silence there in the third row"
A voice interrupted our  rejoicing
"I told you to keep your voices low"
The teacher kept on harassing


But I remember love very well


Safwan Arekat
http://magicboat.com




[This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-30-2000).]

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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-01-30 03:02 PM


Safwan, sweetness overflowing.

Claire

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-01-30 03:06 PM


This is absolutely delightful.
You made me smile
Liz

Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-30 04:05 PM


This brought a smile to my heart as well!! Wow and what an ending!!                    

Denise

mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
4 posted 2000-01-31 12:48 PM


I think I remember that love too~

Very nicely written~
Marie~

Zelda
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NOVA
5 posted 2000-02-01 04:35 PM


This was beautiful reading.... my first one, and I'm awed!

Z

LngJhnAg
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6 posted 2000-02-01 04:47 PM


Saf - great read, and it does bring out the old memories.

Zelda - welcome to the Forums - I hope we find your poetry in here often.  Just a friendly word of advice, however.  There is a poet in here named Toerag (yes, Toerag).  He is a rascal and a scalawag.  If he says anything to you, just let me know and I will gladly give you the correct interpretation.  Remember, his name is Toerag *wink* and he's a devil!  He's also a good friend of mine, but don't hold that against me - OK?

SEA
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7 posted 2000-02-01 10:17 PM


Safwan, this was incredibly sweet. I am such a sucker for romance!   -SEA
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2000-02-04 05:17 PM


Safwan how can you keep your mind on your studies
if you are admiring the college lovelies?

I know...in life we both love to learn and learn to Love(laugh)....James

THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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9 posted 2003-12-03 05:55 PM


i am sure he can
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