Open Poetry #5 |
Love, A Memory |
Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Love, A Memory I remember love very well I remember the love that I felt You were very close to me then A memory in my heart is kept A memory from a dreamy heaven I remember you talking to me with your brown eyes smiling and conceded to unspoken plea as you moved into closer filing I whispered a hushed tone in your ear You allowed me a hesitant approach aside you had brushed a strand of hair "tell me, and fear not a reproach" How had they been in wit abound? those words I said to win your laugh My heart a dance to twirl around at music in the trumpet’s draft Ever so more I was mighty pleased in joy I bathed and in glee I basked as a touch of silken skin appeased the prayer which my god I asked * "Silence there in the third row" A voice interrupted our rejoicing "I told you to keep your voices low" The teacher kept on harassing But I remember love very well Safwan Arekat http://magicboat.com [This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Safwan, sweetness overflowing. Claire |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is absolutely delightful. You made me smile Liz |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This brought a smile to my heart as well!! Wow and what an ending!! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I think I remember that love too~ Very nicely written~ Marie~ |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
This was beautiful reading.... my first one, and I'm awed! Z |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Saf - great read, and it does bring out the old memories. Zelda - welcome to the Forums - I hope we find your poetry in here often. Just a friendly word of advice, however. There is a poet in here named Toerag (yes, Toerag). He is a rascal and a scalawag. If he says anything to you, just let me know and I will gladly give you the correct interpretation. Remember, his name is Toerag *wink* and he's a devil! He's also a good friend of mine, but don't hold that against me - OK? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Safwan, this was incredibly sweet. I am such a sucker for romance! -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Safwan how can you keep your mind on your studies if you are admiring the college lovelies? I know...in life we both love to learn and learn to Love(laugh)....James |
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THE-1-U-DISLIKE Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 20 |
i am sure he can |
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