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Safwan Arekat
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since 2000-01-29
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Bahrain

0 posted 2000-01-29 03:04 AM


                  


                    Sweet


    She is sweeet       the sweetest sweet
    fit for a pot of      the purest treat

    Cute is her face      it makes me daze
    soft is her heart  in passion and heat

    Her way of dress       is high finesse
    with rosy scent        and makeup neat

    Bold is her tongue    to lash and stun
    fast is her wit     that can’t be beat

    Strong is her will     with noble aims
    and in retreat       there’s no defeat

    These are traits    I judged from afar
    What will I say         if I ever meet?

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[This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).]

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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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1 posted 2000-01-29 05:37 AM


She sounds perfect to me.
And she gets a sweet poem.
Why don't you give it to her?
Liz

Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-29 09:58 AM


Welcome to Passions, Safwan! This is a lovely poem! Appropriately titled!! Please check you email for a special welcome!

Denise

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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3 posted 2000-01-29 12:49 PM


This is lovely and I agree with Liz....I think you should give the lucky lady your poem  
Welcome to Passions....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



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4 posted 2000-01-29 01:01 PM


Safwan-
Say it just like this !
Perfect.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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simplyYRREHS
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since 2000-01-03
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5 posted 2000-01-29 01:05 PM


OH, how I wish to be someone's inspiration for writing such a lovely piece!  Loved this one!  Welcome to Passions.


Sherry

 "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau


Martie
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6 posted 2000-01-29 01:07 PM


Sweet and tender poem that tells your feelings.  Enjoyed, and welcome!
Safwan Arekat
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 38
Bahrain
7 posted 2000-01-29 01:18 PM


Thank you all !!  

Your words are so uplifting.

Oh...  I did meet her...

She is a Movie Star ...See..

And She was Sweet..

Safwan



[This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).]

THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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8 posted 2003-12-03 05:53 PM


pojah paht again right
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