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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Sweet She is sweeet the sweetest sweet fit for a pot of the purest treat Cute is her face it makes me daze soft is her heart in passion and heat Her way of dress is high finesse with rosy scent and makeup neat Bold is her tongue to lash and stun fast is her wit that can’t be beat Strong is her will with noble aims and in retreat there’s no defeat These are traits I judged from afar What will I say if I ever meet? [This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
She sounds perfect to me. And she gets a sweet poem. Why don't you give it to her? Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Safwan! This is a lovely poem! Appropriately titled!! Please check you email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is lovely and I agree with Liz....I think you should give the lucky lady your poem  Welcome to Passions.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Safwan- Say it just like this ! Perfect. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
OH, how I wish to be someone's inspiration for writing such a lovely piece! Loved this one! Welcome to Passions.  Sherry "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet and tender poem that tells your feelings. Enjoyed, and welcome! |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Thank you all !! Your words are so uplifting. Oh... I did meet her... She is a Movie Star ...See.. And She was Sweet.. Safwan [This message has been edited by Safwan Arekat (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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THE-1-U-DISLIKE Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 20 |
pojah paht again right |
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