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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
DreamlightIlluminated above us a dreamlight glows. My lover knows the bathe and flow of my shadow.  Claire[This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 01-30-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely vision, Claire. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I'm not a big fan of free verse, but this painted quiete a picture! Nice one! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So vivid a picture in so few words . Beautiful. Liz |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very nice Claire.....and with few words!!! hehehe you know I like that part! Robert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, as always, Claire!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire- Refreshingly simplistic. The quiet images float so easily. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Me liked. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Beautiful yet short saying so much with just a few lines A poem of a special sort "The bathe and flow" wow The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Martie...thank you! Master...I am not actually a big "writer" of free verse. I just sometimes like to dab my pen into a little unrestrained ink and see what flows. (o: Liz...thank you so much...glad you enjoyed this little thingy. Robert...thank you. Sometimes only a few words are necessary, you think?  Denise...thank you, your words are always appreciated. Marge...thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this. It's different from what I've been writing lately. Claire |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, Mike! Helmut...thank you, my friend. Claire |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
What beauty I find in this~ Simply marvelous~ Marie~ |
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Safwan Arekat Junior Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 38Bahrain |
Claire..How I would love to to catch a thought in but a whisper. Yours comes pretty close . Safwan |
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