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Manifested Destiny
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0 posted 2000-01-30 04:46 PM


I Thought I Was Dreaming

I thought I was dreaming
But then i realized
Almost as if struck by lighting
That this was definitely reality
The man in my deepest desires has manifested
Like a sudden storm
The realization hit
That he is the one
The one my soul longed for
His essence has manifested for me
And
My soul longs no more



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-30 04:50 PM


Welcome to Passions, MD!! This is lovely! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-01-30 05:20 PM


MD-
Welcome to Passion's.
Nice entrance.
Hope to see more.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 2000-01-30 05:22 PM


This is lovely...to find what you've been waiting for!!! Welcome to passions!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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4 posted 2000-01-30 05:36 PM


Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you.
Manifested Destiny
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5 posted 2000-01-30 05:47 PM


Thanks for the warm responses! I already feel like a member of the family. I am a "newbie" a writing poetry, but since I met my soulmate my heart is just overwhelmed with things to say! Thanks again for the warm responses! You all really know how to make a girl feel welcomed!
Beri
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6 posted 2000-01-30 09:51 PM


Welcome!  Its nice to know you had such a great inspiration for your writings!  I loved this piece, and can't wait to see more.  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...


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MD, I am so glad you found your hearts desire! Welcome to Passions...... I'll be looking for more ..... -SEA
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8 posted 2000-01-30 10:30 PM


Truly beautiful!  Welcome to passions, we're glad to see you here!  Btw, I love the screen name!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


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9 posted 2000-01-31 12:54 PM


Great poem, you will be very welcome here at passions
Me2
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10 posted 2000-01-31 01:00 AM


MD~
My first poem and my first day here too!  I love the people already and they have become very inspirational!  You'll see!!
You are feeling what I am feeling also! You said a lot of what I wanted to say. You got the gift! Looking forward to many more from you!
Paul  ( alias Me2)  

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11 posted 2000-01-31 01:02 AM


MD!  Clarification ... I'm feeling the same about a "woman" I just met.  I read your poem again and realized what I said in the reply sounded ...  a little funny!  LOL
Sorry.
Paul

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