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Open Poetry #5

She says...

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-31 12:41 PM

she says
i have a heart of gold
but it only helps to weigh me down
she rivets and halts the world at will
just to prove thats shes still around
and she needs to end my imperfections
just to prove that she can
doesnt she sound more like a man..
she wonders why i bother to care
she will stop the wind in its very wake
just to relish the sound
of everyone's meager heart break..

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-01-31 12:47 PM

She doesn't sound too nice....... I hope you aren't too serious about her.......Anyway, Great writting! -SEA

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